The doors slammed shut as everybody focused on the person storming threw the door. they all gasped. It was Ace "Put your hands behind your head and find you a corner!"demanded Ace.
"What do you want from me." stuttered Bob.
"I want all the money in the volts!" roared Ace. The lights as the alarm shone a red light on Ace's face.
Ace had a gun with a steady finger on the trigger Bob's eye bulged as he swiftly stuffed the money in the bag. "Nice doing business with ya." joked Ace while bolting down the street. As the police were hot on his tail but once around the corner he disappeared down a dark gloomy alley way
Great descriptions showing the personalities of the characters. I can really imagine being there.
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